Christmas original - "Toys"

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famous beagle said:
This is an original I wrote a few years ago for an EP that my wife and I made. I've thought about maybe trying to sell this song, because I think it's got good potential.

Any thoughts?

Thanks

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=328768
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I reviewed this over at the clinic so I'll just repeat what I said there.....

A bit of SSSSSSSibilence on the vocals on Toys...... The lead vocals are a bit boxxy or maybe mid-ish... The backing vocals are pretty spot on though - they are blended well - I can't hear any problems with them. Rest of the mix is good....Who is singing backups? (edit - your wife)

I loved the lyrics. Got to say I blurted out a laugh when I heard them. It started out so pretty and sweet then....well all you readers will just have to listen....

Thanks for putting some Christmas spirit in me today....
 
Sounds good. It didn't sound like a Christmas song at first but as it goes on it sounds more & more like one.
 
Theres some potential although I probably would change some of the words just as a really anal poetic thing I have.

If you can find a buyer why not sell it.
 
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