Christian Song - Surving the Storm

[JerryD]

I wrote this after a sermon called "Surviving the Storm". I saw a lot of hurting people. I know a lot of hurting people. So I wrote this as public domain to help others as well as my family and friends.

Surviving the Storm. MP3 Link

Whenever you'r weary from the storms in your life
and everthings broken
and theres no place to hide.
whenever your heart has been shattered on the floor
He'll pick you up and carry you through the storm.

Chorus

Even though the storms in your life seem to stong to endure
and the wind and rain outside is blowing down your door
The fire of his love will keep you warm
and the strength of his hand will help you
survive the storm

2nd verse

Whenever you feel like you can't go on another day
whenever you feel alll alone and nothings going your way
whenever your heart has been shattered on the floor
He'll pick you up and carry you through the storm.

Chorus

Bridge

Just like a lonely ship that's been tossed on angry seas
and just when you thought that you were down to your last bended knee
your vessel may be tattered and worn
but God will help you survive the storm.

Chorus
End.

 

[mjr]

I wrote this after a sermon called "Surviving the Storm". I saw a lot of hurting people. I know a lot of hurting people. So I wrote this as public domain to help others as well as my family and friends.

Surviving the Storm. MP3 Link

Whenever you'r weary from the storms in your life
and everthings broken
and theres no place to hide.
whenever your heart has been shattered on the floor
He'll pick you up and carry you through the storm.

Chorus

Even though the storms in your life seem to stong to endure
and the wind and rain outside is blowing down your door
The fire of his love will keep you warm
and the strength of his hand will help you
survive the storm

2nd verse

Whenever you feel like you can't go on another day
whenever you feel alll alone and nothings going your way
whenever your heart has been shattered on the floor
He'll pick you up and carry you through the storm.

Chorus

Bridge

Just like a lonely ship that's been tossed on angry seas
and just when you thought that you were down to your last bended knee
your vessel may be tattered and worn
but God will help you survive the storm.

Chorus
End.

I like it -- a lot!

 

[JerryD]

Thank you.

 

[ido1957]

Cool song
- the vocal phrasing in Verse #2 is excellent
- the second line of the bridge seems a bit long, a word or two too many and it sounds rushed when you sing it.
- the overal structure is good. V/C/V/C/B/C typical but familiar.
- few pops in the recording that you may want to remix for.
- vocals and playing are really great. Mix is good - I read the MP3 comments and I would leave the levels where they are IMHO.
- and yes it's good to get a spiritual song in here once in a while.

 

[JerryD]

Cool song
- the vocal phrasing in Verse #2 is excellent
- the second line of the bridge seems a bit long, a word or two too many and it sounds rushed when you sing it.
- the overal structure is good. V/C/V/C/B/C typical but familiar.
- few pops in the recording that you may want to remix for.
- vocals and playing are really great. Mix is good - I read the MP3 comments and I would leave the levels where they are IMHO.
- and yes it's good to get a spiritual song in here once in a while.

Your good. I knew that line on the bridge was too long...I was trying to make it work. I guess not. I'll try to rewrite that.

The song structure is one I use too much. I think I'll try something different on the next song.

I adjusted the levels and uploaded the new MP3. That's probably why the levels are okay now.

Thanks for you help...nice catching that bridge part. I thought I covered it up but I guess not. lol

 

[jfrog]

Nice. It'll undoubtedly speak to a lot of people.