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[dmckissic]

I posted a version of this song earlier, just playing around. After getting some real good advise from Suprstar and Jeffmaher, I cleaned it up a little and re posted it here: http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8863226, let me know what you think. I plan to redo the whole thing and incorporate more of the advise I've gotten here. Thanks for the help guys.

 

[Greg_L]

Not great. The vocal reverb/delay/effects is too much and frankly doesn't sound good. Having everything sandwiched up the middle except for the random tom hits is distracting and sort of nerve wracking. To hell with the angels, this is making me cry. The song has no flow whatsoever. Pick a time signature and stick with it. This is like one of those old beatnick poetry readings where some chick is reading bad poetry while some dork stands behind her randomly beating a bongo drum. It seems as if you can play the guitar and sing decently. First thing I'd recommend is finding a beat and sticking to it. Then, use the panning knobs on your mixer to give things space. Then, turn the effects way down and see where it stands.