check theze out

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dirtyp

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I have 3 songs availble click on soundclick, there rap with a political touch check em out



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Man, I just gotta say...the beats aren't bad, but when you rap the vocals don't sound blended with the beat and it's killing your sound. Actually it sounds like you're reading your lyrics and not feeling them as much as you'd like to believe.

Also, you seem to have to have a very difficult time riding the beat. Do you rehearse your vocals at all before you lay it down or do you just go in and do it hoping you can do it in one take? If you're working the one take method...please stop. It's not working for your sound.

I'm not trying to hate on you at all, I just think your game needs some step up and shine. You say that this is how "these politicians be playing us" but all I hear is lyrics with no thought behind them. You want to do a political track, use well known facts that people can relate to and make them think "Damn yanno, this dude is on to something...I think he's right"

No hating just helping,

Fie.
 
im goin to help you out on your link post..

http://www.soundclick.com/dirtypocketsproductions

cause I hate to copy and paste..


I see you in NEW London, CT..so I wont hold that against you(was stationed up there)

I checked out both tracks..and i gotta say you need to work on your flow with the beat..and better vocal mix into the song..It really sound like you reading..vocals are dry.IMO need to pratice riding toe beat before you record.. learn how to catch the snare hits on certain words..

and Fie made some good points..

just keep at it you will get better..
 
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