I'm not going to be the best for criticism, but here's my two cents. I very much liked the song. I was impressed. Although, in the chorus, when you sing the word "operator," it sounds weird to me. It almost sounds like you're trying to double track your vocals, but it sounds a little off to my ears. Keep in mind, I really don't know what I'm talking about. Great job on the song. I liked it a lot.