Check out my first piano tune!

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DAS19

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Check this out, I just started playing piano last week and I really like it. I just direct ined the line in acoustic guitar soo it sounds bad but im going to have to redo it but tell me what you think of the overall idea of the production and where you think im going with it.

Im mos def going to redo the acoustic and vocal tracks.

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Piano sounds good.

Guitar isn't so great, because as you said, it was recorded direct. Still sounds okay though.

I don't like the vocals.

Everything else about the tune sounds good.
 
Im a little whiney on the vocals but it has potential. Thanks for the comment keep it comment.
 
I concur with all that's been offered but also add the odd panning of vocals in the intro particularly is, well, odd.
Rework, resubmit.
 
good tune. cant' wait to hear a finished product. nice work for only playing the piano a week.
 
Is there odd panning on the vocals? I didnt pay attention to the mix as much as I did to the song itself for this version.
 
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