I agree that the guitars are too distorted. I can hear a really nice guitar sound masked by too much saturation. If you mic'd an amp, it might sound better to turn the distortion down and the master volume up. It may be uncomfortably loud, but it will get you a cleaner yet ballsy tone on the recording. Aside from that, you have a unique voice that I like. I would suggest practicing by singing scales, or something like that, so you'll become familiar with every note that you wish to land within your desired range. I only say this because your voice seems strong and there are some notes that are under par with what you're obviously capable of.
