This is a short orchestral piece I wrote recently. I was inspired by soundtrack music although this wasn't written to be synced to film. Anyway any thoughts or criticisms?
I like the piece, C -- but the repetitious note that is occurring off left needs to be better defined somehow. It's a little "clouding" and too thick. Because it's not doing much but providing some rhythm, I'll pull it back. Eventually it got slightly distracting.
Good name for the piece ... for that's what the music felt like.
