Can You Advice Me on These Songs,Please?

[jcsanchez]

Hello, everybody:
I am trying to get accostumed to my Tascam 2488 Neo. I recorded 3 songs (they're not original songs; recorded for entertainment purposes only, not distribution). I recorded all the tracks using my Yamaha MM8. I would like to have some feedback on the way they sound. Any comments,critiques and feedback would be appreciated. My goal for this is to improve he way I am recording.
The songs are:
"Beautiful,Beautiful"-Francesca Batistelli; my wife sings this one
"Por Amor"-Spanish version of "Above All";can't think of the composer's name right now. Also sung by my wife.
"Heaven and Hell"-Black Sabbath. Recorded by me.
Thanks again for your time.

 

[guitaristic]

Hi! I listened to the first track (Beautiful, Beautiful), and I thought it was pretty good. If I were to change anything, I'd probably set the vocals apart some more! They had a pretty heavy reverb going on the first verse, and it kind of made them sink into the track instead of standing out. You had a a nice drum and elec. guitar sound, but I think they were both a little too big compared to everything else that was going on! Also, the overheads (basically cymbals) were coming in pretty hot, and they kind of drowned out the vocals on the bridge.

Other than that, not too bad imo!

And remember, it's just my thoughts! Feel free to take em or leave em!

 

[jcsanchez]

Thanks for your input. Will keep in mind next time!!!!