A touch of hissyness in the intro... wow... she's got some voice, eh? Is that you? Just assumed you were a guy, if so
Something that's probably frustrating you: sounds like the song is taking place inside king kong's mouth

(muffled highs)...
Best advice for that is to actually get some brite tracks (better OH's for cymbals) and use some condenser mics for 1)vox and 2) acoustics...
Yeah, bass is a little wide and "brown" (if that makes sense)... and certain notes (the higher ones) BOOM right outta there... it's probably stacking on top of the other tracks right around 150Hz and just going BOOOOM! Advice is to roll off lows on almost all other trax, except bass & kick... below 150... that COULD help (could also be you just have one BOOMY string on that bass

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Now, this is just from M.M. speakers... no monitors yet... but IMO if you'd like a better quality mix... borrow some mc012's for the acoustic, a nice LD condenser mic for vox, and retrack the drums (with the mc012's as OHs) so you get that snap on the snare drum, and the crispness of the cymbals...
If you don't have enough trax to do this, forget everything I've said
BTW you stopped drinking coffee, and decided to BUG OUT YOUR eyes instead??
Chad