Betrayed

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Demo only... needs lots of work.

Comments welcomed.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=787980&songID=6643117

Higher resolution version: http://www.box.net/shared/6z0i0koow4

Betrayed

Words and music by: Joseph Spain
Created with Jamstudio.com 2.1, Acoustica Mixcraft 4.1, and Audacity 1.3

verse 1

The day has come a day too soon
and it's too hard to face
How do we save the world we made
or turn and walk away
It's hard to know
was your heart ever mine
You're letting go
Was our love a waste of time

chorus

The sky pours and all of Hell knows
It's harder to hide
From the goodbye in your eyes
Made for the one betrayed tonight
I'm still yours and all the Gods know
It's harder to find
When all I knew in your eyes
Betrayed the one you loved tonight
Now you're not mine

verse 2

The way you signed your letters, love
The way you once held me
There's more to you in all you do
Now through your eyes I see
When losing faith
There's a hope that dies
My heart still sees
past broken vows and lies

chorus

The sky pours and all of Hell knows
It's harder to hide
From the goodbye in your eyes
Made for the one betrayed tonight
I'm still yours and all the Gods know
It's harder to find
When all I knew in your eyes
Betrayed the one you loved tonight
Now you're not mine

chorus

The sky pours and all of Hell knows
It's harder to hide
From the goodbye in your eyes
Made for the one betrayed tonight
I'm still yours and all the Gods know
It's harder to find
When all I knew in your eyes
Betrayed the one you loved tonight

(repeat chorus through fade)
 
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A good song & I can grasp what you're reaching for vocally - It needs an almost Bee Gees Barry Gibb falsetto in the chorus.
the backing and vox are all very mid mud in tone you nee to spread the signal across the EQ range.
Good song - work on it.
I'd offer this to the two remaining Gibbs if I were you.
 
Sounds pretty good. Every once in a while, there was a vocal note that was much louder than the rest. It might be worth putting some compression on that.

I'd also recommend bringing the vocals down a little relative to everything else.

Nice effects on the vox, though. That was cool.
 
A good song & I can grasp what you're reaching for vocally - It needs an almost Bee Gees Barry Gibb falsetto in the chorus.
the backing and vox are all very mid mud in tone you nee to spread the signal across the EQ range.
Good song - work on it.
I'd offer this to the two remaining Gibbs if I were you.

Ha, I was thinking the same thing about Barry Gibb (Bee Gees) feel to it as I listened to it. Nice angle.
 
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