Battle dome diss record

[y-kause]

THIS IS A DISS RECORD FOR A CONTEST. I BEEN WORKIN ON MY MIXIN N NEED EARS TO COMMENT ON THE MIX AND THE LEAD VOCAL. TO ME IT SEEMS THIN HOW CAN I FIX THIS?

ALL FEEDBACK IS HELPFUL THNX FOR YOUR TIME IT'S THE 1ST TRACK FOR SOME REASON THE FILE WON'T UPLOAD HERE

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