BACK LASH (the 2nd colab with my Hip-Hop/Rap neighbors) Metal/Rap ala RATM

[BCF1]

So as mentioned in previous post: https://homerecording.com/bbs/gener...ing-clinic/desperado-hip-hop-rap-rock-392350/

I have recently hooked up with my next door neighbors Jules Galt and Otitis playing some guitar on a few of their Hip-Hop/Rap tracks, which I'm still working on.

I also shared a few of my tracks with them to have a go at however they saw fit.

My original version of the song BACKLASH is here :

https://www.reverbnation.com/wristlock/song/27057166-back-lash

My mix of the new alt. version featuring - Otitis is here : https://soundcloud.com/wristlock/rap-lash-2-128/s-ydbQE

Thoughts on mix(s), which version is stronger, whatever......
All comments welcome

 

[TripleM]

I liked the intro and kick-in. That was cool. The main crunch guitar sounded real good. Vocal delivery is really good. Vocal tone is good too.

I think the vocal level is a bit too loud - at least during the verses.

The drums are pretty far back in the mix.

You might be able to nudge up the bass. It's lacking a little power.

I'm being too critical. But hope I helped. I thought this was pretty good.