Xeries
Earth Member
This is just about done. Any suggestions would be appreciated.
Wig
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=7041102&q=hi
Wig
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=7041102&q=hi
ido1957
9K Gold Member
Big, bold, bright. Has it been "mastered" ? Sounds pretty much done to me...wonderful piece of music....
Xeries
Earth Member
Big, bold, bright. Has it been "mastered" ? Sounds pretty much done to me...wonderful piece of music....
Thanks very much, ido1957. I'm nearly done working on this piece, but I think if I bring down the flute just a little and eq it a bit warmer, I'll be closer to what I hear in my head. Thanks for listening.
heatmiser
mr. green christmas
Sounds nice. Great separation and it sounds like it has a lot of air to it. Liking the piano and the acoustic. Wishing the swells of strings came up a bit more at times, but that may just be me. Good job.
Xeries
Earth Member
Sounds nice. Great separation and it sounds like it has a lot of air to it. Liking the piano and the acoustic. Wishing the swells of strings came up a bit more at times, but that may just be me. Good job.
Thanks, heat,
Good idea about the pad swells. I'll try to do that if I can drop something out so I don't overlap too much.
Thanks for the suggestion.
T
tmix
Well-known member
It sounds pretty good.
A lot of the individual tracks are nice sounding. It is a little busy, and to be honest...the drums suck...softly.. but none the less. I like the cello, but there is nothing solid down at the foundation. Some instruments coming in and out or taking turns at different times would work better as an arrangement.
The more I listen, everything sounds like it has many different acoustic spaces, not like you are sitting in front of a band, but more like you are sitting to one side of the stage need the acoustic guitarist playing the arpegiated parts on left, it sounds too close.
A lot of the individual tracks are nice sounding. It is a little busy, and to be honest...the drums suck...softly.. but none the less. I like the cello, but there is nothing solid down at the foundation. Some instruments coming in and out or taking turns at different times would work better as an arrangement.
The more I listen, everything sounds like it has many different acoustic spaces, not like you are sitting in front of a band, but more like you are sitting to one side of the stage need the acoustic guitarist playing the arpegiated parts on left, it sounds too close.
rayc
retroreprobate
I like everything excpet the bass drum & snare - the former sounds like punching a side of beef (Scott Walker style).
Can you do a 2 octave lower line for the root parts of the piano & flute lines when they lead? that'd give some bottom end.
I can jsut hear something playing a bass line - maybe just boost that instead.
Very nice, though you could occasionalyy drop the arrangement down to 2 instruments just for contrast.
Can you do a 2 octave lower line for the root parts of the piano & flute lines when they lead? that'd give some bottom end.
I can jsut hear something playing a bass line - maybe just boost that instead.
Very nice, though you could occasionalyy drop the arrangement down to 2 instruments just for contrast.
G
Greg_L
Banned
Yeah it needs some bottom end and the drums sound pretty bad. The intstrumentation and arrangement is nice, but it seems kind of repetitive.
Xeries
Earth Member
This has been remixed again. I added the bottom (contrabass) but it go a little lost in the MP3 conversion from the wave file. I tried to fatten up the drums, but this would be better with hand percussion instead of kit.
See what you think about this mix. It's the same link at the top.
See what you think about this mix. It's the same link at the top.
snellular5
neil young whore
Great
Excellently put together, to sum this up in one word i would pick beautiful.
Excellently put together, to sum this up in one word i would pick beautiful.
ido1957
9K Gold Member
Still sounds good to me - this is pretty much done IMHO....
Xeries
Earth Member
Xeries
Earth Member
Still sounds good to me - this is pretty much done IMHO....
Thanks again for listening. Feel free to PM me if you want any downloads.
