ATTERION does a Metal Ballad ?!?!?

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OK first off, ballads ain't my thing, I'm freakin METAL HEAD!!!

But anyways, I decided to write a song about an ex-girlfriend who dumped me because a Ouija Board told her I'm evil. And she believed in all that crazy shit, and I...

Well OK, I'm evil.

Anyways have a listen and let me know what you think.
The song structure is ultra simple (I don't want to waste to much time on a gushy suck-song). Instead I approached the song with taking a simple repetitive part, and constantly keeping it evolving via playing each part differently and panning moves for the vox. Much like the ocean, it's always the ocean, and the waves repeat over and over, but it's always changing, and you can watch for hours (If your into that type of gayness). Before I hear a ton of "The Guitar needs to be way louder" type comments, know that even though I am a metal head, I intentionally left the guitar in the back. I really didn't want to have any instruments other than the bass, drums, and vox, having dominant parts (Although various parts move in and out of the mix to help it evolve).

The song was written originally with the guitars tuned DGCACD (Standard tuning with each string detuned a whole step), and in this version uses BEADF#AB (Celebrating my renewed love of all things evil :D )

The tracks are as follows:

Lead Guitar (Ibanez through a Mesa Dual Rectifier and Marshall cab)
Gibson Les Paul (Clean through a Tone Lab)
Gibson Acoustic (Clean through the mixing desk)
Lead Vox (Through a Rode NT1, through Focusrite Twin Track Pro)
Backing Vox (Through an Oktavia Model??? Can't remember, also through TwinTrack)
Bass (Custom built 5 string, with progressive wounds)
Piano (Edirol Super Quartet)
Choir (x 2 Via Korg N264 and EXS sampler)
Drums (Pearl World Series mic'ed individually, 3 different mics on the snare SM 57, NT1, and "Cough" Samson C03)
Cymbals (Paiste Signatures...Ride mic'ed seperately with Oktavia, the rest through the overheads, which were set fairly close).

In all 18 tracks. Mixed in Cubase SX2, and Mastered in wavelab.

Most tracks were left with the EQ's flat except the 2 electric guitars, and 2 vocal parts. The vocals have mild multiband comression/limiting. The Multiband, Reverb, and Delay FX are all Sonitus FX.
At mastering I gave it a mild push at 8Khz (Which after listening to it a couple of times, I'm not sure it was needed). Finally a hint of PSP Vintage Warmer, just a hint, maybe enough to bring the signal up .02dB or so.

This mp3 is at 128kbps, and I did notice a dramatic change in quality from the original wav (Mostly typical mp3 flutter), but aside from that it this sounds pretty damn close to what I'm hearing through my studio monitors (Event TR-8XL's).

Please give me honest feedback. Thanks. Hope you enjoy (Just don't expect anymore crappy ballads from me though).

EDIT: Please Right click the link, and select "Save Target As", for whatever gay reason that's all my freewebs server will let me do.

 
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Here are the lyrics to help you along. Feel free to copy and paste or print them as you see fit.

()=Background Vox
"..."=Delayed parts (3 repeats at 888ms)

"HILLARY" (By:ATTERION and DARKENED, Lyrics By:ATTERION)


Oh Hillary ("Hillary..." )
Oh can't you see
I'm lost without you babe

I live in fear that
We will never meet again

You let the love we had, grow "cold..."
(Like my darkened "Soul..." )
And may the years divide
But my pain it never died (died)

Oh Misery ("Misery..." )
It had to be
To live without you babe

I live in hope that
We will some day meet again

You tore the love we had "apart..."
(Ripped out my blackened "heart..." )
Bleed deceit, under moonlit skies
Spirits came forewarning, left you denied (denied)

It seems to me
We should have seen
We were once in love
With no angels above

Now I'm "drowning..."
Slipping towards "death..."
I'll speak your name
With my last breath ("Hillary..." )

Spoken:
I won't forget you
Nor I, will you
And on your last day
I'll be there, waiting for "you..." ("Hillary..." )
 
Sorry apparently you have to right click the link and "save target as". I'll work on it.
 
I've tried every possible way of downloading this file. Everytime I get "SECURITY - Your current internet security settings do not allow you to download this file."

Yeah - something seems pretty damn fishy...
 
There must be something wrong with your host. I tried it, and after several attempts, I got it to start downloading at 1.45kps, and then it timed out...
 
It brings me right back to this thread...

what is this... some kind of sick joke?

:D
 
OK, I don't know what is going on. I'm searching for a new host. I'm done with this freeweb bullshit.
 
Damn.
I like it a lot.

I can't place what it kinda reminds me of...
Are you playing all instruments?
 
I didn't care for the samples for the cymbals and toms.....but it sounded good otherwise!
 
ThanX CellarDweller!!!
I Played all but the acoustic.
I've been kinda scared to bring this one to the rest of the band (in fear of uncontrollable laughter).
This is such a far stretch from what I normally write.
I think after a couple of days of listening, the only things I don't like are the Ride Cymbal (A little loud), the snare (needs to be a hair louder), and the Kick (needs a little more mid punch). The problem is they all sound good in some spots but kind of get a little lost in others (or over emphasized). But it is a really dense mix, so I'm thinking maybe some sort of mild sweeping filter envelopes ?!?!?
 
Spaztic said:
I didn't care for the samples for the cymbals and toms.....but it sounded good otherwise!
I sampled my drummer's drums a while back, just to have for scratch work, If he plays the tracks live, they'd probably have more expression.
Note: Only the drums, and Choir are sampled/sequenced.
I would have played the drums live, but my current studio, is not equipped to house a big-ass drumset. I'll probably re-track them live in our rehearsal room, or one of the local studios that are better equipped.
 
I have no problem with samples, they just sounded lifeless....like you touched oun they need a bit more dynamics.
 
Spaztic said:
I have no problem with samples, they just sounded lifeless....like you touched oun they need a bit more dynamics.
Yeah, I could have gone all out and really tweaked the drums, but like I stated, I really didn't feel the need to invest that kind of time and energy into this song. If I take this to my drummer he could really do the trick. But if I take it to the band, we'll probably end up with all new lyrics, new riffs, and shredding drums, which is kind of the point as to why I haven't yet. It's the Darkened song that will never be released other than for you guys to all pick apart.

FYI: This song originally had all kinds of cool changes, fills etc. but I stripped them out for use in a couple of other tunes I have in the works. Stay tuned, because what we do as a band blows this shit clean out of the water.
 
cellardweller said:
Damn.
I like it a lot.

I can't place what it kinda reminds me of...
Are you playing all instruments?

Damn bro you need hearing aids already? Sorry to "hear" that. :p



HATED IT! It's very boring to me. ZzZzzzZzzZz aHem...soRry..JusT..WokE...Up.

BTW, HILLARY's a SLUT!
 
I'm really quite surprised by you manic, I'd have you'd be more supportive of your brother in evil...

Irregardless, I thought it was a cool song.

Look forward to more submissions (of whatever genre) by Atterion.
 
livilaNic said:
Damn bro you need hearing aids already? Sorry to "hear" that. :p



HATED IT! It's very boring to me. ZzZzzzZzzZz aHem...soRry..JusT..WokE...Up.

BTW, HILLARY's a SLUT!
And you're an ass!!! :D
But your honest!!!
And I NEVER said the song was good!!!
And as for her...Who give's a shit???
BTW that's what the rest of my band would say too...I think this one needs to go the fires.
 
This song has been removed from the web, and I'm destroying all remaining copies I have. It Sucked!!!
 
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