Arise Shine

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channels3

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I have posted a new tune I am working on called 'Arise Shine', and would love to hear your thoughts on the mix, the song, or both.

Thanks!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/channels3music.htm


Let me know if the lead guitar is coming through too loud, too soft, etc.. Is the voice at the right volume compared to the music?

Thanks again!
 
the vox in the verse part is ok for me, but when the chorus starts it gets too far away; the guit could be less washy.

nice tune!

cheers
 
really nice wide mix, but just before the solo the verb seems to get pushed up too hot and loses its transparency, the mix definition starts getting lost in the wash. Outside that it was good to me...
 
channels3

I thought this was quite good.
Now don't take this the wrong way but
I think you should retrack the singer and have him
sing like he's got a pair.
Not to say that there are any pitch problems cause there
aren't any.
The last chorus had some of the FEELING I am refering too.
I liked the guitar, very understated and effective.
Yes definitely better singing near the end.

Good job
all in all an entertaining listen
 
Thanks

Thanks for the feedback.. it's very helpful!
BTW, I play, sing, and basically do everything in the recordings, just FYI... Speaking of which, I would like to hear what you mean by 'get a pair'.. I think I know, but just want to make sure ;-)

I may re-record the vocals with more 'feeling' throughout, and see how that goes.. I used different reverbs on the chorus and the verse, and go back and forth between which I prefer, and when.. The more feedback on that I get the better!

Also, I am playing an acoustic guitar through a J-Station amp simulator, which may be why it's not as 'crisp' as it could/should be. I may borrow an electric from a friend and try it.

Thanks again for listening and commenting! It will definitely contribute to my revisions!
 
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