Anyone want to give feedback on my new song?

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Hi all! Please give a listen and provide feedback. Keep in mind that 1) this is not a final mix; 2) vocals are a one take scratch that will be redone (pitchy, effects are off, etc.). I just want to make sure I am going in the right direction. Let me know if anything bugs, and if you have better ideas.

Thanks!!

Brett:spank:
 

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Hi Brett,
I listen to your song and the instrumental. I think that it fits your vocals... You did an awesome job!! ;-D Keep up the good work!
 
I think you are going in the right direction. The song has a good tempo, and it builds nicely (especially the second pre-chorus). I did think the first chorus (at about 1:20) was a bit abrupt; it sounded like the song had stopped at first. You might want to focus on this in your final mix.

Overall I really did like it.

Dave
 
I thought it was great and it was raining when I listened to it. As for constructive comment - perhaps some female backing vocals. :D
 
Wow..................I like........very cool.......exelent guitar work.......the vocals are cool too (production wise)....and the lyrics are deep......lots of dynamics.....yeah,, would be good on a movie sound track.....is this a home recording or pro studio?????
 
buskerboy said:
I thought it was great and it was raining when I listened to it. As for constructive comment - perhaps some female backing vocals. :D
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I'd LOVE to have a female backing vocal! Just don't know any females who sing, sadly!
 
fuzzsniffvoyage said:
Wow..................I like........very cool.......exelent guitar work.......the vocals are cool too (production wise)....and the lyrics are deep......lots of dynamics.....yeah,, would be good on a movie sound track.....is this a home recording or pro studio?????
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I just saw this. Thanks again man! Vocals...I triple sang them (something new for me). I'm now exploring with just singing once, then tripple track with pitch shift on two panned hard, and no pitch shift on center, which will be louder than the other two. I did this last night on a new song, and it sounds really cool! Thick and in your face (heavier rock song). As for the studio.....lol....sort of like a professional studio....if pro studios are in a 5x5 attic closet with mice and young kids screaming (playing) inthe background! Not quite the rockstar environment, but hey....it's the end product right?
 
I think it's a great song. Well arranged and performed. Don't mind the occassional pitchiness, gives the performance life.

You definitely need to focus on the bass and kick and get them working together better. I think the bass has too much energy and is squashing the kick. Makes me wonder what your mixing environment is like.

The mix is very dense in a lot of places and you have to be careful with slicing up the eq sprectrum.

I don't like the snare, seems overly compressed to me, or at least lacking in high freq's.

Cool,
 
i tried, but i don't have any criticism. pretty cool stuff.
 
nice guitar work, nice arrangement, nice job....like your vox the best at the end when your hitting it hard
 
Nicely done sir! This reminded me of Coldplay-esque type songs.
 
I like it, very good... it has the energy, nice vocals, dynamics, I can feel it... But I'm against female backing vocals :)
 
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