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Musically this is a very intense piece - which complements my interpretation of the excellent lyrics.
The slightly mechanical drum sound matches the martial overtone in the song too.
Excellent job rascals. I have no suggestions - you've it covered.
 
Wow, I even used the right complement/compliment in the sentence.
This by way of saying I like this song & the tension in it.
 
I liked the song too. Vocals sound real good with the tension of the two tones going on, nice panning. At times I felt that the tune was suffering a bit from monotany- similiar to "All you do is play me". Maybe a giant break in there somewhere. I think I would have liked to hear a killer guitar solo in place of the synth solo, my preference though. Original sounding stuff.
 
Cool piece of music, love the way it keeps building with synths and other instruments. Just a cool overall feel here. My only recommendation is to maybe differentiate the chorus a bit more from the verse. It's slightly constant, maybe throw something extra in there like a tambourine for the choruses. Then again the constant build is pretty cool too. Just an idea, excellent work here ;)
 
Thanks ray snake and riffy..

Riffy...yes m8 the keyboard is going to be changed after it goes into the verse and chorus as we felt it was two one track and needed to be changed in riff and effect and also when it hits the chorus near the end be totally changed so it plays hard chords to take the song away rather than just follow the same course.
this should hopefully answers snakes ideas too..be back later with the changes and hopefully you can give us your thoughts.

thanks

akkie the tartan rascal
 
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