Abyyss,
As always man, thanks for the listen. I think I know what you're talking about as far as the trumpet like instrument. That's a pad with a relatively slow attack so maybe you're hearing it hit a little after the beat. I was going to shorten the attack, but I thought the delay added a nice vibe. I'll try it with a quicker attack. Also thanks on the hook instrument, that's my baby. That is actually my main bass patch that I tweaked out and layered. Experimentation leads to some cool shit sometimes.
I was actually cruising around Nowhereradio this AM and I found your site. I was going to send you an e-mail to ask you about it, but I got tied up with work. I didn't listen to the track there yet.
So you're still trying to make changes to the drum pattern? Well, first what are you producing on? Secondly, I don't think changing the kit is going to really help here. It's the sequence that needs changing.
Listen to my beat right here for instance. Hear how the hi-hat (the chick-chick type sound) is pretty much continuous and the snare (the crack or whip like instrument) is pretty much keeping a consistent rhythm? These are very important elements as they keep the song moving regardless of what the other instruments may be doing. Also listen to the kick and see how it follows the bassline and reinforces it? This is another very important element as the kick and bass drive the song.
Your bassline is pretty consistent on your track so I would say just keep the kick simple, maybe just a very basic beat. For now just use an 1/16th note pattern for the hi-hat and have the snare fall on 2 and 4. You can get more creative from there, but I believe this will give you a solid foundation to work from.
If you need clarification let me know and also let me know what gear you're using.
Stray