Please take a listen to "middle aged man" I'm just about ready to put a stamp on it, tell me if there's anything you hear http://www.box.net/shared/5731vp3qcw
Sounds good. I'd say maybe the snare can come up a bit. It sounds just a little distant. The toms seem louder during a roll. Besides that, sounds good. You have a great voice.
You do have a fabulous voice Cool, kinda prog rock tune, I have no nits with anything. Rami's the drummer so I'll digress to him on the snare/toms - they sound okay to me.