All three songs.

[Chris Fallen]

Okay, I posted one song a day or two ago and now I have the other two 'completed.' These had to be thrown together for tomorrow because they needed them for a demo type thing, but now I want you guys to check them out and let me know what's up and what you think I could change. I know the guitar sounds HELLA muddy, but when I take the second guitar out and leave the first it sound really really clear. I think I'm going to take out the second and retrack it sometime to get a better sound.

I used:
N-track
Omni Studio with Delta 66
PreSonus Bluetube Pre
Alesis M1s

Vocals: V67g
Guitar: sm57
bass: direct mixed with miced (D112)
Drums: ecm8000 ohs, sm57 snared, d112 kick

And here are the songs:

Christopher

 

[B.SABBATH]

I listened to "Burn." The song is cool but the recording is very bad... I dont know how to tell you to make it better, but a start would be redoing the guitar with a different sound.. It doesnt sound good and the drums are buried....the bass is almost not there...actually now I here it a little... There are many problems like tuning...

the tune is cool but the recording is not good.. maybe someone smarter can help you..

later
sam

 

[Chris Fallen]

Yeah, uh, thanks. I think.

Christopher

 

[mixmkr]

not bad for a wash of distortion, some reverby screaming vocals and some drums peeking out of the left and right speakers every now and then. (1st tune)

 

[Chris Fallen]

I switched the song order because I thought Lemmings came out better than the rest and nobody's download more than the first song. So yeah. Try Lemmings...

Christopher

 

[crazydoc]

Lemmings

The bass and drums are mud to my ears.
The bass is low volume, muffled and muddy. It needs more punch and clarity - volume and maybe some increased midrange eq.

I can't even hear the kick except at the very start - when the voices come in it's completely lost. The rest of the drums are very muddy too.

I think if you clean up the rhythm section the voices and guitars will sound ok.