All Land is One Land

[Jessica_X]

Thanks RayC.
MJBPhotos thanks for mentioning that again. I forgot. Listening to the chorus bass part as a whole, soloed, there are actually quite a few things I forgot to finish there!

 

[easlern]

I don't remember a lisp in the last version? Brothers of the sea is where it's most pronounced.

 

[Jessica_X]

I added some strategic lisping. Didn't think anybody would notice!

 

[easlern]

Sorry, just wondering if a de esser setting changed.

 

[Jessica_X]

Thank you. I will try a de esser. I appreciate the help!

 

[easlern]

Actually the de esser would just take more esses out so best to leave it as is I think.

 

[SteveAlton]

Yeah a million tracks is about right. At least you have the foresight where to put everything. Sometimes deleting tracks works, other times they become part of the identity of the tune.

The mix seems pretty even overall and I can hear everything clearly....

Nice tune....

 

[VomitHatSteve]

Woah! I can almost understand the backing vocals in this version. That doesn't seem right!

The static burst still sounds like a small dog to me, but I doubt I'll ever be able to unhear that.

No new nits from me tho.

 

[Simon Fanta]

I would work on the chorus. I don't like the melody a lot there and the energy is too similar to the verse.