Acoustic version, and mix opinion

[batnana]

Hey, I just released my first mini-project on youtube, which is a cover version of "Dream a little dream of me" - sung in hebrew. don't hate on me.
I rearranged the whole song, played the guitar, b.vox, uke, precussions, and of course mixed and recorded this whole thing.

Please let me know what you think about all of the above, and enlight me if you can (It's not too hard since I consider myself a newbie)

Thanks!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bd8pA1LxGwo

 

[rayc]

The intro voice is a little too strident but things sound much more settled when the band kicks in. You might consider some automation of the volume for a few of the more aggressive sounds. Mic technique will overcome those though.
Interesting that my ear hears Hebrew but automatically translates to what I remember the lyrics to be.