robby-
i totally understand what you mean about the song being bass driven. The sound of the bass is a little too pick driven/farty for my taste so my brain was saying, "Push it back a little under the guitars" lol. Don't get me wrong though, its good playing. I also see that you are now going to retrack it with a different setup, so that may fix my complaint. Im a guitar player also, so im destined to want loud guitars.
Im not all savy with EQ (i just turn knobs) so I can't really offer much help on the kick situation. I understand that you don't want alot of click but i know that there are plenty of records where theres a big non clicky kick sound, that cuts through alot better. Your kick isn't coming through as well as i would like to hear it. You may want to experiment some more with it. If your happy with it though, don't worry about it.
Thanks for the comments on "A narration Of" . Ive never really listened to King diamond but i know what your talking about. Where are you planning on getting the album mastered? Just out of curiousity.
oh yeah, im listening on computer speakers but they are a better quality set. Stuff usually sounds pretty good on them.