A little too wussy-ish? The ladies dig it.

[HogansHiro]

Hey all, I hate to say it but this song is (as my friend put it)waaay to "male jewel" for its own good. All the ladies love it so I guess I should make a conerned effort to clean it up/fix it.
Please listen and tear to shreds.....

I am still looking for a bass line and a new guitar soloist so if you want to volunteer let me know.

Its actually me singing for a change...be nice on the vox



New Song - "OK"

 

[W.I.S.C.]

HEY!I'm not a chick and I liked your tune!Some might think that makes me gay,oh well...The recording is good!The song is better!and the chicks probobly love it.Good work!Hope it gets you laid more than once.I did a song that got me laid and then redid it for another girl and it worked like a charm.Later...

 

[King Elvis]

Gene Simmons once said: "If a guy tells you that he got into music to contribute to the greater good of mankind, thats bullshit, it's to get girls"
So, if chicks like your song...mission accomplished.
Oh yeah, I like your song too. Maybe I am getting in touch with my feminine side. Hey, it worked, my wife just came in and told me she likes this song...IT WORKED!!!

 

[mixmkr]

well dang...I posted a reply...but it got zapped...

I liked the song. A little echo-y in spots on the vocals for me.
I'd be glad to help out with a bass line and/or a gtr lead. Let me know how you'd like to go about it, if you are interested in my abortions...

and...I'll do it for the LOVE of music... not the chicks...!!


























(like they are really piling up here in the wings of the mp3 clinic )

 

[Jagular]

Good stuff. I like wussie songs. I write them myself

 

[HogansHiro]

Thanx for the comments...MIXMKR, I'll pm ya cuz I am interested in help with it......

BUT JESUS PEOPLE!!! WHY IS IT EVERYIME I POST SOMETHING NOBODY HAS ANYTHING BAD TO SAY!!!

I KNOW I'M NOT "THAT" GOOD!!!!....or am I?



please somebody tear it a new one.

 

[Fmmahoganyrush]

Man.. I'm gonna have to get on Waldo's shit.. I can't seem to get this thing to play..grrrrrrrrrr.. I'll keep trying...

 

[Fmmahoganyrush]

OK.. more than one way to skin a cat... I downloaded it..hehehe.

Way good brother!! I see we use the same drummer . Nice and smooth sound though all in all.

 

[punx]

Nice song, nice tune. Nice vocs, drum are cool, guitar is smooth
Perfect
Bya

 

[SLuiCe]

Man.. I'm gonna have to get on Waldo's shit.. I can't seem to get this thing to play..grrrrrrrrrr.. I'll keep trying...

You take it easy on Waldo...The man's up to his ass in bills, and if I'm not mistaken, traffic is just growing and growing...

but I know you're just kidding


Pretty nice guitar sound. Very nice vocal. Personally I'd back off the delay a touch or experiment more with the delay time...there's something too obvious, or maybe too 80's about it for the tune, which has a sort of Googoo Dolls sound to it. Also, I would consider spreading the guitars out across the stereo field a little more to wide things up a little, even in the verses. Things sound pretty centrally located to me.

That's a list of little nitpicks, and quite subject to opinion.
This is very well recorded, and I think you're very very close on themix.

And ya. It's pretty wussish


But who's counting

 

[Fmmahoganyrush]

You take it easy on Waldo...The man's up to his ass in bills, and if I'm not mistaken, traffic is just growing and growing...

I know.. Waldo-n-Me are cool. It's most likely something dumb on my end, and I need him to tell me what it is.

 

[participant]

boom b-boom...

Love that kick drum beat on this... sounds quite commercial. Nice vocals... reverb is perfect on the voice. The R & B type beat really fits... the way you play that guitar, it sounds like a nylon-string... nice light touch.

Good stuff... and I hope I'm not a lady for saying that

 

[Track Rat]

It's got a good beat. It's easy to dance to. I give it a 73. I dig it.