u know who it is: Decent beat Like the energy you come out with but something doesn't seem right... Your flow doesn't seem right on the beat, it's a bit hard for me to expain what I'm hearing... Also it is very annoying hearing you suck up a deep breath after every bar. Did you record this in one take?? Seems like theres an echo on the vocals. What mic are you using?
Listening to a few more of your tracks, Your flow just sounds off on the few songs I listened to. Like when you recorded you wern't really fealing the beat.
Crying - this beat is HOT.
Sorry if this feedback seems harsh, I am being as honest as I can to help you out. Also your prolly not going to get much feedback if you dont return the favor.
Peace
