a life that can't dance

[cantthinkofname]

i was inspired by another thread here today and started a song i think i actually might keep for once lol

this is the beginning and will be adding more later, this is one that would've kept flowing straight through to the end really quickly & with ease & probably would've even liked it, but have to go now and don't have time, kind of even like what the songs about go figure


I smoked too many cigarettes today and i drank too much beer
but its not that that's going to kill me
its a life that can't dance

 

[gecko zzed]

i was inspired by another thread here today and started a song i think i actually might keep for once lol

this is the beginning and will be adding more later, this is one that would've kept flowing straight through to the end really quickly & with ease & probably would've even liked it, but have to go now and don't have time, kind of even like what the songs about go figure


I smoked too many cigarettes today and i drank too much beer
but its not that that's going to kill me
its a life that can't dance

"it's a life that can't dance" is an awesome line. The cigarettes and beer line is not unusual, but I reckon the 'dance' line is strong enough to give the song a twist; it's the unexpectedness of it that takes it out of the mundane.

the challenge will be to find more lyrics of the same originality.