"A Hudson memory" Critique and advice is wanted!

[14yearoldkid]

Hey guys! and gals! I just posted a new song I finished today! =] Please i need to get some advice, comments and critiques about the song! Hope you enjoy it... Thanks again for your time...

www.myspace.com/bxany Song is the first one (A Hudson Memory)

 

[Xeries]

You have a nice vocal delivery and the drums are interesting. I don't really care for the vocal treatment, (V-vocal articulation that sounds a little vocodery) Other than that, it is a nice sound. Lyrics are drawn out a bit long, but I could get used to that.

Wig

 

[14yearoldkid]

hey! thanks for the critique and the time you took to listen to it! Yeah im messing around with vocal effects a little bit =] Maybe i am overdoing them a bit! thanks again

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