A few new songs...

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Hi all,

It's been a while since I've posted on here. Does anyone remember me?

Anyway, I've posted a few new songs from my upcoming CD, all recorded on my VS-880EX. They will all be on my upcoming CD, "Modern Child of Abraham", that will hopefully be out by Xmas. Have a listen if you wish and I would appritiate critique or comments.

Its here: www.mp3.com/benwalter

Thanks as always,

Ben
 
I listened to "The Inside Out."

I liked the instrumentation. Good selection of guitars, piano, harmonica, etc. Nice enough melody.

Not sure about the vocal effects. Sounded unnatural, which didn't fit the mood of the song, at least to my ear.

Some pitchiness in the vox here and there.

There was some sort of clicking on the left side. I think it was part of the percussion section, but I can't pin it any further than that.

Harmonies in the chorus would be a nice touch.

An occasional word gets covered (e.g., "feeling like a ?? on a stage" at 1:45. I think it was "puppet" but I'm not sure).

My thoughts...
 
Listened to all three. Nice songs. Great instrumentation...

How are you tracking those vocals? It sounded like there was an aluminum tube on your head. I say that meaning no offense, it was just hard to listen to, in my opinion. If it's an effect, I'd say lose the effect and leave the vocals dry.
 
Hey Ben,

Always good to hear from a fellow VS880EX-er. Sounds like you
figured it out.

I dig how you stuck to the genre. I can never do that. The lyrics are deep.

The playing is good on all three songs, and I like the mix.

I'm going back to the threads main point. The vocal effects
need to be worked on. I know the VS880EX has some real nice
subtle reverb you can add to your vocals to cover up any dull spots.

Other than that I really like where your going with this

DustyJack
 
HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO,

I'm going to bump this one because I really like where Ben's going with his Album.

How 'bout it Ben, are you up for suggestions.

I'm feeling your lyrics, however, I would suggest keeping the vocals anywhere from dry to mild reverb.

Welcome Back


DustyJack


What a poet I am, I am
 
HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO,

I'm going to bump this one because I really like where Ben's going with his Album.

How 'bout it Ben, are you up for suggestions.

I'm feeling your lyrics, however, I would suggest keeping the vocals anywhere from dry to mild reverb.

Welcome Back


DustyJack


What a poet I am, I am
 
Hi... folks, sorry it took so long to get back and reply... unfortunately, I have a demanding job and busy family that keeps me overly consumed at times. But thats life, and might make a good song now that I think about it.

Thanks for all of your critique, support and thoughtful comments.

I'll start at the top:

TripleM - I can't tell you how much I try to get a decent vocal, but I'm resigned to the fact that its not in my cards. I should just give up trying to color it and let it go dry, but, its even worse!! I will go back, however, and cut the effect down considerably since it seems ot be a recurring theme.

ChristopherM - aluminum tube on my head?? Excellent!! I wondering how to best describe it!! believe it or not, part of that sound is my natural voice... but after taking a closer listen based on your comments I will go back and re-mix... what I really need is a REAL vocalist collaborator!!

DustyJack - I appritiate that you noticed the "genre" thing, because I put a LOT of concious effort into that. In fact, whole album (12 songs/10 recorded so far) relates via both the genre and the message. I first defined what I wanted the album to be and took off from there. I also set a few rules to help me achieve it. 1. No love songs. 2. All in the first person (deeper into the album I assume the voice of various protaganists) 3. All had to reinforce the Americana genre, and how it relates to the new, modern world post 9/11 (thats the concept) 4. Only new songs, and, finally 5. I would write it ALL first and then record it all at once. This is the first time I've take the time to be this disciplined, but I think its working out very well. I will load up other songs in the next few weeks and see what people think.

For me, the thrill is in the song and album creation: i.e. conception, writing, composing, arranging and recording. What I need though is a great vocalist!! A few years back I recorded a song with a fellow HomeRECer named Teddie Tapawan. The result was GREAT!! And I might be up for that process again, but would really like a local person to collaborate with too. The internet is great, but not much on the way of creative spontinaity.

As for as the VS880EX goes, I like it and like the Roland process but have been fanticizing lately about making a jump up to the 1824 for the next CD. For these songs, I sequenced all the drums, keys and strings, etc. on Cakewalk and synced it to my VS, ran them through a Roland JV-1010 synth and recorded them, in sterio, on the VS. Then I overlayed acoustic and electric guitars and vocals, etc., hope to mask the midi keys. All was recorded in sterio and there lies the problem with the 880 - way too much bouncing!!! It is too hard and time intensive to mix that way... a lot of trial and error. But other than that, the VS technology it great in my opinion.

I see you are a Texan. I grew up in Houston and Texas is where I aquired my songwriting instincts. They don't look at you funny when you say you're a songwriter down there!!

Thanks, again, for everyones responses and I will be posting some more songs soon.

Ben

www.mp3.com/benwalter
 
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