50th try to post this Indie/Alt/Pop Rock tune!

[blkdog7]

Great song, thanks for posting it.

Here's what I think -

There is a drum fill - part of the verse - that plays repeatedly that just throws the groove right off. I think it's like a a snare hit and then a triplet and then another snare hit. Simplify the drums a little on those spots, and it will flow perfectly. Try to get a crash cymbal across the transition from hi hat to ride cymbal.

Vocals could be louder.

-Casey

Hey thats some good advice. Do you mean during the chorus? The verse drums never realy change. Should I scrap those drums completely and get a new groove?

 

[Supercreep]

Hey thats some good advice. Do you mean during the chorus? The verse drums never realy change. Should I scrap those drums completely and get a new groove?

It's during the verse, and I vote yes - simplify the drums. They're distracting as they are now.