listened to on edge...
the bass high end is clear (in the beginning), just needs a lot more low body. low low. if you (listeners) turn it up, you'll hear the bass. needs more.
at :16 i'm hearing right speaker clipping. toms on the fill or something.
i would like a bit more snare. maybe some more mid.
it all sounds pretty good. the singing vox sound good. maybe give a little more highs. but not totally needed.
i like the kick sound you have.
sounds pretty good