2 unfinished tracks I would like your mixing opinion on!

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iletic

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They are not finished so I get that they sound empty, if you have suggestions about that I am up for it, but more importantly I would like to know if you think mix is clean and good, and wide enough? (I don't know if it is me, but I feel like FL doesn't export tracks wide enough, or doesn't let me make them wide enough even when I am using stereo expanders, izotope imaginer or whatever it's real name is and such)
Electro something something:
https://soundcloud.com/paljevinas-hejterz/m-m-mmmmm/s-4eiT6
Trance something something:
https://soundcloud.com/paljevinas-hejterz/disco/s-auFER
 
I listened to the first one--sorry, one song per thread is my rule. Nice grooves and soundscapes. I particularly like that bouncy, fat kick sound that fits perfectly with your synth bass. This is good electronic music. I'm not hearing much continuity or connection between the different sections. I'm hearing more a medley of individual parts rather than a composition. With electronica, I'm looking for a narrative--something that takes me on a journey between point A and point B, without necessarily quite knowing how I got from one to the other. Does this make sense?
 
Yes, It totally is a medley type of a song. I am so used to making very short songs, or segments of a song, and then just living it unfinished. That's why I never have a full story (journey) behind it. (Or at least these 2 don't) Thank you for your advice!
 
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