pretty good. what you do after that will be more telling... i can sense full on, 4/4 timing, double tracked rhythms blasting away. Those tones are good, but how it all comes together for the assault is what'll make or break it.
Sounds pretty good. I would shelf out some of the frequencies below 125Hz on the guitars to let the bass and kick drum to resonate well. But otherwise, timing and tone is spot on!
Sounds great-i like the am radio sounding opening, you know something is about to hit you in the face and it does. Timing sounds on and good tones, and i can say that my response took me 5 times longer to type than it took to listen 5 times to your piece. I like the drum sounds for vst-even the swish of the high hats sounded good.