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Hi Gonzo-X, I'm listening to the new version you posted above ,pretty cool song you have here , it has a unique style that I pretty like, arrangements and effects are subtle and well designed/balanced. the acoustic guitar and lead electric guitar have really sweet tones. I haven't listen to the...

Hi Robus,this is a really great tune listening to it on my zeppelin, it sounds really good and i really like it. The bass line is to melt ,well rounded and sits very well giving a very fluid atmosphere, grounded and light at the same time. ,easlern did a very good job. The guitar tone and...

Thank you very much Darren for your feedback, greatly appreciated, sometimes you know that you need to change something but don't want to compromise and feedbacks helps to sit the dueling and move forward. Will post a new version in the coming weeks. Thanks a lot again :)

Hi Darren, I often mark my own lyrics with the breathing, it helps a lot. First I record it possibly 2-3 times without thinking too much about it then I tried to identify, when I struggle for long phrasing or when the breathing can be part of the full arrangement. It does wonders :) Anyhow...

I do understand where you're coming from though with the idea of revising the song, I tried it when I recorded it, but the way I wrote the song does not allow it and I would like to keep the lyrics as they are. I will do another take on the vocals with the groove in mind and see if I can come...

Hi Robus, Thank you for your feedback always much appreciated. I totally agree with you on the hook part, I thought about the chorus part during the recording process but the song would have been too long so I left as it was. I was thinking that a nice guitar arrangement ,guitar riff could...

Hi and welcome to the forum :) I very much like the lyrics and the subject, the guitar arrangement is well presented and support well the songs. listened to it 3 times, the guitar on the risght could come up a bit as there is some very nice touch that could be emphasize at time on the quiet...

Hello Everybody, Here a song I wrote few years ago and I would like some feedback and help on the guitar parts if possible. the acoustic guitar on the right is bit sloppy as I did it with bar chords and my little hands are not the more powerful someone could have. Eventually the arrangement...

as an intermediate player(with 2 left hands I have to admit, no offense intended on left handed players though :) ) the drier version sounds better and nuances are more distinguished. I'm far from this playing technique and speed ,but it is something interesting to explore

I'm a bit late but this mix sounds more open and more in tune with the feeling of the song. Great job though, some slight improvement might be further needed as others have pointed ,but the main vibe and feeling is present. great song again :)

This mix is really improved,the lead guitar fits nicely and gives this crescendo feeling, breaking smoothly into the chorus and bridge. I'd take care a bit more of the low end from the acoustic and the piano, there is some muddiness on both headphone and speakers. I wouldn't spark too much yet...

I listened to the old version and the new version is much better, more opened and there is a sense of space. i really like the accoustic guitar coming up at 0.36 somehow I will second Robus on the guitar (being guilty of it myself, it helps to be on the other side to understand the concept). at...

I have listened back to back on my pc logitech speakers and monitor headphones the 2 versions so a pinch of salt is required : new mix I like the drum forward, cymbal/OH could come up a bit eventually, but that could be part of the feeling/effect you are looking for, background vocals could...

Thanks a lot Robus, I really appreciated it . I've learnt a lot on this session and will definitely make it to practice. I need a break from this song for now, as I have been working on it for months now and I feel is time to move on from it for a while. But I definitly keep in mind your...

hi guys,Here the last render of the song, I have sidechained most of the guitars with the vocals, then the whole mix to duck with the vocals. dropped the guitar levels too and leveled a bit more the vocals with some volume automation. I have a/b the mix with previous mixes and it seems a bit...

A widow that play video games hehe that's an interesting picture lol, I will definitly add a fade on that part, that's a brillant idea, didn't think about it, thanks a lot Robus :)

Working now on lowering the guitars , dropped the levels and I gave a try to some sidechain ,seem to work ok for some parts, I do have some issues with the main guitars in the chorus though, the sidechain (with the vocals)does not seem to work well for this part, either they are too loud or to...

@ Buppa po, I have a Bluebird condenser mic with a pop filter, I tried different mic placement . I usually record in my living room as it is the biggest room ,mic placed almost center and singing 10cm-20cm away mostly for verses or softers songs and 30-40cm away for chorus or loud parts. I...

First I would like to thanks everybody for their feedback, it is much appreciated and very helpfull . :) I have made some changes, on the pain points and added a new arrangement for the ending of the song as heatmiser suggested: 1- bongos are now in the intro and outro only 2- I have EQd the...

Listening with monitor headphones, I really like the guitars solo at 1.17 with the transverse flute, and the way the guitars come and go in the verses, it gives a cool surreal atmosphere. everything sound good mix wise, I'll second ibleeburgundy, the ending ends pretty much abruptly, but this...