My latest original song. Feedback on the production in general would be great.
(Yes, it's a video but that's not the main focus which is why I didn't post this is the video production forum.)
You're Killing Me - Freya Gustava - YouTube
Thank you.
I was going to post this as a finished song but I'd like some opinions before I start working on lyrics as I hate going back to the music once I've started thinking about the vocals.
Anyway... be as cruel as you like!
Thanks.
http://soundcloud.com/freyagustava/lost
Lovely song. The funny thing is, I started listening to the song before I read your post and I was thinking your voice reminds me of Elton John... what a coincidence.
I like the song itself, especially the lyrics but there are some problems with the vocals and it sounds like something is getting distorted amongst it all.
I'm no expert but to me the bass sounds a little dull and doesn't seem to go with the rest of the instrumental, however I wouldn't say it's the biggest problem.
The vocalist has a nice voice but when it comes to the chorus it sounds like he's struggling which is affecting the pitch quite a...
Oh, that is so sad... please don't let this be your last!
This piece of music is beautiful. Makes me think of being out in the open air, innocent but adventurous.