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thin, thin, thin. kick is maddening. The song itself sounds decent and worth fixing.

It's not YT. I heard the version in the signature and got a similar feeling in indistinctness. The vocals are loud enough, but lack presence to me and the drums don't sound quite right either...sort of a putt, putt, putt type sound that doesn't sound real even if they are. I get the feeling...

Appreciate that Bruthish. Gonna try something else in the meantime.

Thanks Tadpui. I'll back away and give myself a week away from it, then come back with with a fresher listen baring in mind what's been stated.

Which, again, is precisely why I said the above. Listeners observations count quite a bit, which is why I post in the first place. If you don't listen, what would be the point? Double thanks RFR.

Don't forget this part: "but that can surely be tamed if it detracts from the song as a whole. I'll experiment with a different arrangement, RFR, and see how that goes."

Dissonance and non-easy listening is exactly what I was going for, but that can surely be tamed if it detracts from the song as a whole. I'll experiment with a different arrangement, RFR, and see how that goes. Don't wanna lose too much of the "complexity" though. Thanks a lot for that guy.

Thanks Schwarz.

Wow, many comments going out, and only one commenter coming in. Not even the courtesy of reciprocation. Last post wasn't much different. Am I really that bad?

do a broad cut with about a half db dip and fish between 200-500Hz and you should find it. That 'mastering' type eq dip should be just enough to get rid of what you don't want, but keep what you do want. Once you find the area, increase or decrease the dip to taste. The key here is broad Q...

Not hearing a thing, seems I'm going deaf.

Could be my tape sim asperity? I'll check it out on the phones. Thanks for letting me know.

sorry bout that, but I'm not sure what you mean. I don't hear any noise/distortion, but maybe I've just heard the song too much and not tuning in. thx man.

I kept wanting to say "maybe the guitars are a touch bright," then I'd go "no, maybe not," then back again. So guess their fine. Bass could be just a bit more distinct, though. Really, really like the song itself.

welcome.

Drums MUCH better and the mix feels fuller now. It's just a matter of preference from this point, but I still feel it could use more low end. Also a matter of choice, but you could try centering the bass (sounds like it's off to the left?), then give it a bit more punch to see if that beefs up...

got an "oops"

Is the scratchy fizz on purpose? I'm genuinely asking because I've found some ppl like that, so it could really be a preference. The song itself sounds cool to me, but it was hard for me (personally) to get past those guitars... ...but my ears feel scraped clean. :D

Well, maybe they are coming through fine, but everything's so one-level that there's little distinction (for me). "Are you saying for a mastered track it's too much?" 100% yes. But that's objectionable since it seems you're going for a particular sound by matching the loudness. That may be...

EDIT: are these raw files? they seem pre-limited to me.