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Okay, again, I try to post all my lyrics with my songs. This happens to be a darker song with a few bad words in it. Sorry as hell. Fine... never again will I post a lyric, even though I was requested to on one song (that had the word "trephination" in it) because someone didn't know what I was...

What an ass. Don't listen to my songs ever again. If you tell me you can understand every lyric to every pop song you've ever heard, you're a pathological liar. I put the lyrics up there in case there was a word or two people couldn't understand or hadn't heard before. I try to do it on all my...

Thanks to the helpful advice and assistance of HR.com members, I have a new MP3 ripper that does a much better job, and my 128Kb rips now sound much better. So for those of you who had trouble with the 160 kb streams, this should work a little better. I've changed them all to 128 kb. Right now...

I consider myself pretty avant garde (I've been listening to Ween since Pure Guava, and I own the only Ethyl Meatplow album ever released, for God's sake), but this is a little much for me. I like a cohesive melody and structure. This is a bit too dissonant and chaotic for me. Having said that...

Sorry... tried to listen but NWR wouldn't find the song.

First Listen: Guitar playing good, but a bit sloppy... no offense. Vocals too loud! You have a good blues voice though. Just back them down a bit. Not something you hear on this forum much, but you do need to compress them or back off on the volume or something. Compression would probably help...

I got the BLUES! Nice song! As far as critique goes... It was a little bassy on my system. Very Neal Young. I agree with the "great guitarist" comments. Who's doing the backup vocals? You? Snare was a little weak. Overall, fun!

Does this site have the BLASTER virus? Soooooo sloooooow. Anyway... I just subscribed to NoWhereRadio's "more space" deal... so look for more music from me in the near furture. I no longer have to limit myselft to three songs! Rock on! I really appreciate your input!

Sorry about the 160 khz. I'm testing a new MP3 ripper, and I went overboard. I'll see what the new one sounds like at 128. Thanks, again!

Hate you, Ghost? Never! You and your cronies have made this song MUCH better than it was! I thought I had it, but you showed me the weaknesses. I like it much better now. I have more songs in progress. I'm looking forward to getting your input. Thanks!

NoWhereRadio is a little slow right now. I'd recommend downloading. :-)

Almost forgot... Here's the lyrics. I'll try to do this from now on. You can tout your jagged scar of blind devotion You can keep on telling me that I’m emotion-less A victim of excess You can wear your tattered badge of absolution Stick it in my face and tell me I’m solution-less But now I...

Fattened the drums. Brought up the vocals. Changed the guitar sound a bit -- that was difficult, considering the original recording -- it's not that much different. Let me know if this is better. Both versions are there, in case you didn't hear the first one. Thanks to everyone for their input...

First listen: Vocals sound a little unsure. Sing it like you mean it. Your voice isn't bad, overall. Sounds like you're afraid to let go. Nice bass progression, and I like the guitar riffs, but they sound -- on my setup -- very bright and indistinct in a way I can't describe. Do you have reverb...

Thanks, SLuiCe. The low vocal is, I think, a subconscious response to being not completely comfortable with the lyrics or the vocal. I should know by now that burying a vocal doesn't solve the problem. As I said, it's subconscious. That's why I come here for the opinions of my peers and...

First listen: Ooh, yeah. The hiss and harshness really push one away from the song right away. It's all bass and highs. No mids. I like the arrangement and the vocals. Nice guitars. The mix -- placement-wise -- is okay. It's just WAY too treble-y and bass-y. Lose a bit of volume on the bass...

On second thought, I agree that there could be a bit more snare in there.

First listen: Okay, this is probably going to offend someone, but is the lead singer a guy or a girl? If it's a girl, I'm kinda turned on. If it's a guy, I need to shower the unclean feeling off and then watch some football. (Some of my best friends are homosexual; don't get me wrong. Just not...

First listen: Nice vocals! Nice harmonies! Both on vocals and guitar. Very nice guitar sound, though it could be a bit "fuller." Don't ask me how to do that -- I'm a newbie. :-) Backup vocals are a little strong in the bridge or chorus or whatever that one part is. "When you look in the...

First listen: Impressed with the piano playing. Someone's not too bad there. Snare drum a little thin and quiet. Give it a bit more "punch" maybe. Vocals quirkily off key in places. Don't know if you were going for that, but it certainly fits the song. I kind of like it. Very Ween-ish. Lose...