Would you be willing to make the DI tracks available?
Yeah, the timing needs a lot of work.
The tones are high-mid heavy and unpleasantly gritty and it's lacking real bottom end or low-mid substance.
Here's a sm57 and e609s mic comparison.
There's two clips.
the Bridge Humbucker
the Bridge Split Coil
The sm57 is first followed by the e609s.
Each mic is 6 inches from the speaker rim and with care to point them at the speaker center. See pics below.
Gtr: ebmm Axis-SS
Amp: Bray JTM45...
Understanding the Bass Gtr and Guitar relationship is paramount. Making them work together as a single sound is the key. Just the gtr tone is not enough.