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Shy drums, very shy. Vocals a bit too loud I think. Nice spread otherwise, made with care, well balanced. Sweet piano sound. Good voice man, nice natural vibrato, I'd like to have that too.

There's a high metallic wobble, especially audible in breezy. Either that or I'm going nuts.

Ah, found the audio. I don't like your hair but I do like your style. It might be intentional, but I feel like you're missing out on some of the low frequencies. The crunch is there, obviously intentional, but it seems to lack some foundation. I approve of your use of your commodore sixtyfor...

Same here. The video I requested is not available, even though I didn't request anything, I just pressed play.

Haha, no I wasn't actually referring to anything anyone said. Problem is you can't really call it electronica I find, 'cuz then you might as well use the name analoga. I do use quotes quite liberally though, I agree, maybe too much so. There's just so many different styles in electronica that...

The snare volume is not consistent enough when it first starts, then it goes too quiet, and when the song explodes it's way too loud. The drums are not embedded into the song well enough. At that point the guitars and bass and bass turn into a bit of a muddled mess too. Your tracks sound...

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So... yeah. It's a recording. Made at home. I'd like you to comment on the mix and anything else. Pretty sure it's the right forum for it. You're not going to say no to a good free album right? Right? Didn't think so. Thanks!

But Logic can do everything that the two others do at least as well and much more, doesn't that qualify as better in your opinion?

ah, there you are. Logic ftw indeed.

No other Logic users??

:laughings: I'll give that a try!

I think you're either a talented or fairly experienced mixer. The Notwist comes to mind. I have no suggestions, I like your mix of real sounds and thin pads, really good. You know your way around a synth. Which ones did you use? Care to sing on this one?

Hi. I used to make 'this kind' of music. I think the mix works, in the sense that everything fits and nothing's fighting. The instrument that starts around 2:19 for me is a big no-no, I really wouldn't do that, it sounds amateurish and needs love. 2:48, that synth is way too flat. So you have...

Nice, quirkiness, I like. Reminds me of Mr.Bungle somewhat, not quite as crazy though. See the song starts with a nice drive, whack whack whack, so I got really into it, also the way you sing (rhythm and tone) works really well. The growl, as you noted, is too, what to say, liquid maybe? I also...

Intro: the delay/echo on the piano is not good. It only really shows through on some notes that then just collide with the next primary notes. I don't like synth strings but that's just me. The drums signaling the next part could be more inventive. Then the song goes into a kind of a Vangelis...

Nevermind! Found it. My bad. Shit.

Hi. In the intro to this forum it says "what to do about that itchy throat", but I can't seem to find the answer. Any tips? Thanks.

I like the mix, no complaints there. The 'chorus', you know the loud part, is really neat, it really lifts the song up and makes it come home. Nice and full and energetic, how it should be. Your topic and lyrics are interesting, I like that. The piano is my biggest complaint. I'm a pianist first...

Goodness. That sound. So... clear! Talented much? If I hadn't enjoyed the song so much I'd have said you were just showing off. It's like the demos that come with Logic. You listen and go "uhm, ok that I can't do". Your lyrics are hilarious but I prefer meaning. There, I found a criticism. Jeez.