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LMAO! Am I the only one that gets the creepy-crawly Willies from this song? Must be an atonal quality. That's great though, I think. The lyrics and monotone prosody of the hook couldn't be more fitting for that music. It's as if "maybe it's the times" was meant to be sung over it by...

What the hell Language is that? Don't you know English is the official language of the U.S.A? ;-p I think the recording/mix is solid btw.

That's Lo/fi? As far as Homerecording goes? I guess everything is relative. Sounds pretty damn good to me. Personally, I would have liked more broccoli though.

On second thought, I'm not even sure I'm talking about the same thing. Is the track supposed to cut off before it's over?

To be honest, I think that part caught my attention more than any other parts of the song.

I never thought about Nickelback long enough to consider this question and I think I'll continue with that.

Ask an instrumental musician if lyrics matter. Lyrics matter if you want them to matter.

I've made worse recordings to be sure but it all sounds kind of jammed together on a plane and rushed. The bass sounds good on my shitty computer speakers though. The guitar sounds terrible imo lol. Not that the guy can't play but that abrasive distortion is killing me at the cellular...

Broken ornament. Some nice changes. Good recording. The guitar is tracked pretty much perfectly in my opinion. I really like the opening and was kind of hoping it was leading somewhere else but this is good too, just not exactly my cup of tea. The cymbals are annoying me at certain points...

There's two songs which one? I'm listening to dreams. I like the song. It's decent. But the clipping is totally out of control. Maybe it's just cause I clicked hi-fi. I dunno. There's potential, song writing ability. It sounds like you can play guitar. You sing okay enough. But, this...

Time to Elevate: Hip-Hop Resists Terror and War The Hip-Hop generation is poised to take on added importance after 9-11. Can activists and artists of color lead the generation through the crisis? The biggest news in hip-hop this past summer had to do with beefs, all kinds of them, with...

They both have sexy curves: http://www.aa.alpha-net.ne.jp/mikaela/galleryfolder/gallerybox/guitarwomanw03.jpg http://imm-live-ics.wmin.ac.uk/mad/images/violindress%5B1%5D.jpg http://www.aa.alpha-net.ne.jp/mikaela/galleryfolder/gallerybox/guitarwomanw02.jpg

re: please critique these lyrics I can't critique these lyrics Jimi. It's a very sincere and heart felt song - especially since I know where you are coming based on your past posts about your wife and family. I know you and I bump heads all the time down in the "underwold" about bullshit...

Using Names Effectively in Art. When I hear songs with names in them I often, as a songwriter, pay attention to what the names mean literally not as names but as words. Giving characters names for namesake is a fine technique but giving them names that add additional layers of meaning to the...

>>>>>>>This is my first posting of lyrics here on the HR bbs. I dug up this song I wrote over 12 years ago, so I'm interested to read feedback on it in this day.By all means, post your most positive and critical feedback... Hey hoodoo.....I haven't read the rest of the comments as to avoid...

craving my meat

he..he... yah...mohawk...maybe

No, but I do need a haircut. :cool:

Jesus cut his hair Went to sunday school Oh but even there He was ridiculed Jesus cut his hair Just to be human knowing then and there he'd never rise again Jesus cut his hair the locks of his ruin fell in the barber chair got swept up with a broom Jesus cut his hair it was a mortal wound...

yah, like you said, the rule of thirds is one thing, but there is a lot of other tricky stuff going on here. I've got to read up on the math a bit more. Thanks for the links I'll be sure to check em out.