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  1. jm67

    another world

    This could be very cool. The triplets are a little off (the first round especially), but later it works for me. Sounds like it will be tough to mix but I'd like to see what you come up with! My vote would be to ditch (or heavily process) the guitar that comes in at 1:10. It's very...
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    My First "Pop" Attempt...

    I like this. Actually, for the first two minutes I was a bit "meh" about the song - pleasant but not distinctive. Then the strings kicked in at 2:30 and it went to a whole other level. By the end I was really digging it. The bass and snare (?) seemed a bit buried in the mix. But the vocals...
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    My new track "If Only"

    That's a nice song. Very simple but with a soulful vocal and rock steady rhythm. Can't comment too much on the mix since I listened on mini-headphones, but it sounded good. There are a couple of "clicking" noises where your hand whacked the guitar body. The song is so spare that I'd take the...
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    Shelter - My latest recording

    Sounds really good to me... kind of reminds me of a laid-back Pogues. There are some occasional timing issues (e.g. the banjo in a couple of places) but they don't really detract. The viola/cello sounds synthesized (was it?) - If so I'd suggest either modulating the volume so that it rises and...
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    "Watch me"

    Great sound, and a good mix. I like the raunchy blues vibe. To me this would be a great 3 minute song but 5:20 is too long and the middle section drags. The middle instrumental break isn't distinct enough from the verse/refrain to provide much contrast. Other than that though I really like...
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    Sinister Ride - Original

    Concur that the drums are a bit odd, and that the toms are very forward in the mix. I found myself wishing that they had been played with a little more energy because they don't really drive the song right now. Guitars sounds great, and I thought the vocals were about right. Good song and...
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