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    Original Dark Folk Song : "I Won't Change"

    http://dl.dropbox.com/u/18434241/Magic.mp3 Why do you hate Youtube so much? I like it because then you can read the lyrics with it.
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    Original Dark Folk Song : "I Won't Change"

    Thanks a bunch for all of your opinions. The more the better. It seems that there are always going to be conflicting issues on things. I am going to have to record this one again in the future. I do like the song. Maybe I'll add another verse/ chorus. My friends told me that song was too...
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    Tonight Tonight

    Cool track. Not my type of music, but I enjoyed it.
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    Original Dark Folk Song : "I Won't Change"

    I brought up the vocals on this one. Any opinions which is better? http://dl.dropbox.com/u/18434241/I%20Won%27t%20Change_v3.mp3
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    Original Dark Folk Song : "I Won't Change"

    Weekly - Thanks for your comments! I think I like the tone of the guitar as it makes it darker i think. I actually just added a bit of bass to it. Steven- Thanks for your comments! Yeah, I did some reverb on it already, but I'm still learning how to do use it better. I hear the pitch issues on...
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    Original Dark Folk Song : "I Won't Change"

    Lyrics: Who am I supposed to be What am I supposed to do Please don’t live my life for me I won’t change my life for you I don’t want to shave today I don’t care what you say ma’am Why don’t you just go away Just leave me as I am The world was sweeter when I didn’t know you Wish we could go...
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    Original Dark Folk Song : "I Won't Change"

    Hello Y'all. I wrote a pretty dark folk'ish song called "I Won't Change" and was wondering if you guys could critique it? It's only 1 minute 43 seconds. I've been utilizing all of your tips and I think (hope) my mixes are getting a bit better. Well, let me know what you think...
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    I don't know why I covered this.....

    I forgot how awesome Bill Withers is - what a great tune. Sorry but mid way I had to go back and check out the Bill Wither's version again. I think the song needs some black man vocals :) I do like some parts of your version more than the original. Specifically what was said above about your...
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    While My Guitar Gently Weeps (Acoustic Cover)

    I just listened to it again, and after much thought, I think it needs more cowbell? Has that joke been used on these forums before? I'm new...
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    While My Guitar Gently Weeps (Acoustic Cover)

    I was writing this while listening to the song. I don't really like the ending bit. It sounds like theres a second voice that comes in? Doesn't seem necessary.
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    While My Guitar Gently Weeps (Acoustic Cover)

    Is this really considered a cover? Basically just taking the lyrics and changing all the chords (except for same places where notes are the same). I think it sounds jazzy. I could hear this in a cafe being played in a hotel lobby or cafe or something. A lounge.
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    New song (Original)

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    My Third Recording!

    Weird still. I just had the guitar setup professionally... I'm playing a Taylor 714. Any other comments on the track?
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    My Third Recording!

    I just did some quick changes to blend in the harmonica a little : If you haven't listened to the first one, please critique this one. Not a huge difference. I just think the Harmonica was loud in parts on the other one. http://dl.dropbox.com/u/18434241/Hemingwayv3.mp3
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    My Third Recording!

    Wow interesting what you say about the vocals. I actually love the sail away part. I don't think I could replicate that voice again even if I tried. I am not using a click track. By this you mean a metronome? I don't know why I also get people telling me my guitar is out of tune!! I'm using...
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    My Third Recording!

    Hello Y'all! I'm back with a new recording which I would love your critique of. I've done a lot of work since the last recording and have tried to incorporate all of your comments. I decided to try and go back to recording the acoustic though. I think the best way to do the electric is with...
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    Problem: Recording Vocals - Choppy Playback in Headphones

    No. It plays back fine when I'm only hitting the play key. But when I'm trying to record at the same time it comes out this way :(
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    Problem: Recording Vocals - Choppy Playback in Headphones

    No - the problem is that I can't hear the guitar well as it has a lot of feedback and choppiness that I can't sing with it to record.
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    Vocal Lessons

    Today I tried out vocal lessons for the first time. I did an hour session. We spent most of the time discussing things like breathing, keeping mouth open, singing from the diapghram... I am very torn on whether to continue. I'm really not too interested on expanding on my vocal range, I...
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    Do You Like (Or Hate) Your Voice?

    I just started trying to learn to sing. I don't think my voice is that great but I'm hoping that as long as I can sing on key it won't be too bad. One thing of comfort is that I've read/heard interviews with people like Mark Knopfler and Eric Clapton who say that they really don't like their...
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