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I don't know if this is what you're going for, but I'm hearing a lot of distortion. I think it's the kick 'cause you hear it for the first time around 0:34.

I think the piano is too loud. The pads could come down a bit too. I think the guitars should cut through more than the piano. But nice track.

Nice beat, but man, turn that sub bass down lol. And I do think it seems to be missing something.

Listening now at full volume, I think the snare sounds hi-shelved or hi-passed a little too much, maybe try adding some mids and/or lows. Also the reverb on the snare is too short or something, not sounding good to me. This is a heavy instrumental. I like it.

Nice track. Not too bad in my opinion, but the whole thing sounds a bit muffled. Maybe a little treble boost on the rhythm guitars?

It basically follows it, but it's not quantized, and it does have its own notes on a couple occasions. I made the bass very sub heavy, so on smaller monitors or earphones you might not hear it all that much.

So, on paper, there is no difference between someone who writes the lyrics only, and someone who writes the lyrics + the vocal melody?

Hi, I'm in a band where one guy creates the guitar/bass melody and also plays and record them. That makes him a songwriter. The other guy (me) write lyrics to these songs, which makes me a lyricist. But I also create the vocal melody for the lyrics. Am I only a lyricist, or would I be...

Ok, I updated it again. You will hear it for sure now.

Really? Yeah, it's the same link. The bass basically follows the rhythm guitars, maybe that's why it doesn't stand out much.

Guitars sound nice. The drums are obviously programmed, live drums would sound better. Maybe lower bass just a little? Nice track.

Yes, vocals are clear. Maybe a *tad* too loud to my taste, but then again, I tend to mix vocals too quiet lol. Snare sounds nice. You could turn guitars up a bit.

Ok guys, I updated a new version on Bandcamp with a live bass. I'm still in the early stages of mixing it, but I'd like feedback anyway. Thanks.

I took into consideration everybody's comments. Thanks a lot guys. I'm still working on it. I will get a live bass by tomorrow.

The guitar that comes in at 0:59 sounds real nice.

I just spread a bit the 2 guitars that were conflicting with the vocals. Bandcamp version is updated.

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Thank you for your comments. Yeah, the bass is a VST. I will try to get a live bass for the song. Which frequencies do you think the snare is lacking? I agree it sounds too thin right now. I’ll try to add some saturation to the vocals, and maybe compress a bit more. And they’re definitely...

Listening now, the vocals are indeed way too high-passed. I have a tendency of chiseling a lot of low end away. I boosted some of that low end on the vocals, and reduced the treble on the 2 jangly guitars. I think vocals sound clearer now. I also reduced a tiny bit the volume of the kick...

I would compress the rhytmn guitar slightly to give it more power. I would also add just a bit of higher frequency on that snare, and a little reverb on the vocals as well.