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Thanks! So how is the Akai and how is it working out for you? I considered the 16 track version when I was doing my research but there weren't too many reviews on it, so I strayed away.

Hey thanks for the in depth analysis there Chik! Lol. "Sucky and cheesy" huh? Not unlike a bologna song, lmao!!!

I asked because the beats and melodies all kind of sound the same, you may want to address that as well. Consider someone else to do your beats for a couple of songs. As far as the mixing goes my advice is to choose ONE person to do all of your mixing, allow him to concentrate on it and trust...

First off I'd like to thank you for being the first to critique my song, it's been like pulling teeth just to get anyone to say ANYTHING!!! Yeah we were trying to achieve a laid back sort of subdued feel with this song and thats why I used a simple beat. As you probably noticed all of our vocals...

This is a song I recorded with my group a while back. Its the first song called "Shine." Just need some input before I start on new material. If you like check out the other two songs and tell me what you think.

Thanks, appreciate the advice! Will do.

OK so I posted this in the hip hop section and everyone looks but no one replies...what gives??? Just wanna get some honest feedback on an old song I produced and rapped on before I start working on new stuff. Your comments are appreciated! The song is called "Shine" www.unsigned.com/sunzofthunder

"Tonight" is a interesting song, I mean its a fun song but it could be much better. First off your mix needs a lot of work. The vocals arent mixed properly and the beat could be better. The overall mix is muddy and needs work. The hook is good but it needs to be tightened up as well. Same thing...

Can somebody at least tell me whether or not I posted this in the correct forum?

So check it, this is a joint I produced and rapped on and I just want to get some constructive criticism on what yall think. The song was written and recorded about 5 years ago but I want feedback on some of my old stuff before I go back in the lab. Its the first track called "Shine" and I'm the...

Okay first thing I hear strictly from an overall standpoint is that there is no hook! I keep saying this over and over again the most significant component of todays rap or pop music is the hook! Your beats are pretty decent, the lyrics are typical for this particular geographical segment of rap...

Okay so here's my first official thread here. Although a buddy of mine is trying his best to get me to go computer based as far as recording I'm just not feeling it yet. When I do go there I want to invest in a decent PC/Mac to handle it and right now I just don't want to. But anyway on to my...

Hey man I was impressed with your stuff man! I actually listened to your whole line up on bandcamp.com a couple of times! Nice work. If anything I can say it's work on your delivery a little more and tighten up your hooks. Remember hooks in hip hop are the most significant factor! Otherwise your...

I know this thread is kinda old but I figured I would drop a few thoughts on it. I have had a XR-20 for about 6 months now and it's yielded some pretty decent beats for me. It has it's limitations that's for sure but if u need portability and you like the feel of the MPC products this lil joint...

Not to dis anybody but as an producer/lyricist I don't want no one blowing smoke up my ass! Gimmie the truth so I can improve. Feel me? I just thought the song sounded like much of what I have been hearing and alot of it is not very good...there have been a few exceptions though. But all in all...

nice joint! i diggin this! this is about the first link ive clicked on so far where there was actually good music playing on it! lol. keep rockin on mane!!!

nice beats, lay off the hand claps a little though.

you must be kidding me this sounds like a bad idea poorly executed. DNKYgirl what about this hook sounds sweet???

man your shit is ill as hell! hard to believe you been rejected. these fools today seem to thrive off repetitive wackness! dude i would love to work with you. www.unsigned.com/sunzofthunder i produced all the tracks here and this is my page www.unsigned.com/slord these are all at least 5 years...

The first two songs you have on SoundClick aren't very good. The last one is a little better but it suffers from a lack of direction. You really need to work on your hooks (chorus). 75% of any decent hip-hop or pop song for that matter is the hook. The production is okay here but not...