Hi.
I was kind of cool.
Its sure was a more "dirty" approach. It a bit to rought for my taste. It sounds like all the instrumens are fighting for the same space, and the only one to get clear of this fight is the voice....who is not to good, and gets really naked up there....... boy am i good...
Hi.
It sure was an intresting approach........... cant deside if its cool ore lame....gonna give it some more listening now and then...just to see if it grows on me.
Anyway, Thanks
-einar-
Hi.
Thanks. It was i good mix. The voice could blend a bit better...it sounded a bit dry compair to the rest of the music. But.....do i hear some drumparts that are changed....?
-einar-
Hi.
Nice mix. The only thing i would have worked some more with, is; the bass is to loud on some notes and to low on others....mabye some "automations"...? man, whats the word im looking for....?
The voice could also benefitt for some compression....and mabye some small amount of...
Hi.
Thanks.
What i hear different is:
- there are to much "meat" in the kick. it must be dryer, so that the bass can be increaed and heard.
- the voice is a bit to much "in your face"
- the pick scratch ar a bit to high.
- the snare is a bit wrong....kind of boring, for lack of better word
but...
Hi.
Thanks for taking the time. Much appreciated
Just listen to it on my 2.1 system at work, and i can easely blow my sub with this mix....its way to heavy in the bottom.......
I think it also would bennefit from a lift in the high freq. Its a but "dull" now.
-einar-
Very good...there are still some "rumbling" going on in the low-low frequences, atleast on my 2.1 work system.
Thanks for the time you have spent on it
-einar-
Its a good mix. Still slighty heavy in the bottom, but close. Drums could be more punchy too. Im having a hard time giving directions on what to do, as im the novice here and your the experts.........all i can say is listen to jimmys last version, thats close to perfect
Many thanks
-einar-
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Close.....in the last corus it is:
"After playing i sometimes go jogging
and on Tuesday i play volleyball"
Rest is correct.
really deep lyrics, or........?:facepalm:
-einar-
Ps: i will listen to all the new mixes at job tomorrow.....(got to fill the day with something...;) )
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I checked the tracks and i now see, that there was something wrong with the (what i call) pick scratch tracks. It was originals; the first scratch, the two tracks where panned far left and right, then pulled to center true the scratch. The second scratch was the opposite. From center to...
hi.
There are some weird going on in the intro...the left/right is cool, but its not consistent...
the drums are also to dry or not punchy enough. its sounds kind of a bad recorded drum with to much reverb added- Take a listen to jimmys version. The voice also need some pitch corrections, and...
Hi.
Thanks. It sounds a bit squeezed in the mid range...... the voice could also use a bit of pitch corrections.... other that that, it sounds cool....
-einar-
You could try this one:
-einar-
First; heres my attempt:
https://www.box.com/s/pp9zjueqbka4eokwn7vm
And heres the tracks in rar-files:
Part 1: https://www.box.com/s/xolgaqyflinv94jw4kn4
Part 2: https://www.box.com/s/wcyw1z9zepdyfsmvg5tu