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Somebody said that my vocals in this version of my new song sound "off", although I used some autotune, and I have never gotten a great comment on it so far. I don't know what that person meant. Feel free to comment on the instrumentals, too, but the voice is the main concern now. Here's a...

I've been singing for 13 years and this shit happens to me all the time for some reason.

Hey, it just offers other perspectives from your own point of view. Its not a big magic talent-maker or anything. I just find it fun like playing video games is fun on it, except with art its even cooler because you're accomplishing something. Cool music comes with or without substances.

I wish I could hear it. I'm sure I could give you some decent advice.

Sounds so good that nobody commented on it...until now. California-sounding, I think.

Refreshing. Reminds me of Rammstein if they had an unplugged song/album.

I use autotune, then I listen to the autotuned version of my voice and after that, I sing it again with more correct pitches. For some reason, I'm also off key at times, but I've made some strides with that by finally singing with a correct key and range for my new music. I haven't released a...

It depends on sooo many little factors.

I wish I could hear the song...

Go ahead and listen to my song. The chorus is the part I need feedback on.

Ok. Here is the link that leads to it. Listen to the OVX file near the bottom of the thread, not the JIXX file at the very top. https://homerecording.com/bbs/general-discussions/song-writing-and-composition/altrock-ballad-im-writing-need-feedback-391085/ ---------- Update ---------- Ok...

I should say Peter Steele, as far as metal vocalists go.

I enjoyed that and I was imaging a singer adding lyrics. Nice.Reminds me of nineties rock.

Sounds decent. I speak some Japanese, also. Iidesu.

I write the lyrics only after I write the melody. Not just any word can go anywhere in any melody. I sing gibberish lyrics to my melody then later I write in words if they would sound cool. For the melody, I imagine one then play it on piano to my instrumental track. Or else I just go to my...

I already tuned it to the right key. He said it was "off", not out of tune. That's why I'm here. To seewhat others think he might have meant.

OK. I attached a new version of the song so far. Listen to the vocals and tell me if they sound off. SOmebody told me the vocals in this version sound "off". And I pitch corrected them. he drum probably doesn't sound any better. But I did dd some bass this time also, though poorly mixed.

Cool. Thank you. I appreciate it immensely. I actually have a version with bass and slightly lower guitars with somewhat autotuned vocals. But someone said the vocals were "off", even with the pitch correction I used.

I took the drum track from a professional Youtube video. So the drums are badly timed? As in don't follow the rhythm the song should have? Also, how pitchy are the vocals? I know there is one part at the end when I say "your wrath" that is flat, but that jumped out at me when listening for...

I want to make this better yet. Is it good? What improvement does it need? Vocals? Somebody told me the drums weren't good, but they are the only part I did not write. Am I writing music to the drums incorrectly? I'm trying to figure out why the chorus part of this song(the part I'm...