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It made a big impression, apparently. 🤣

As if he can do that at this point... 🤣

On earbuds: * The kick is fine, I think. * Listened to 'Sheena is a Punk Rocker'. (It moves similarly to yours and the bass drives that one, too.) Your mix is darker. Your bass is more prominent. Your mix sounds better. But I understand why you're wondering about the bass. * The bass 'solo'...

The dbphoto page plays neither of the things I click on.

I like the tune and the delivery, but I'd experiment with putting more space around the vocal. Also, it's a bit disorienting when the vocal sort of disappears for a while the first time you sing 'like a pendulum'. Automation!

What a well-structured tune - builds, takes it down, brings it back up. All I heard this time was the tune. You got a winner here.

Really, really like this one. Sounds great. Another dB or more on the first guitar in the break would be nice. That guitar is the voice of cool.

I like the first one better - it sounds fuller and more present. The kick: It's very prominent, but you like prominent, so it fits your style. It fits the tune. 'Piano rock'. I like this tune.

Bring the vocal up and de-boom the bass (turn it down?). The music's American, but the melody's British, somehow. You've square pegged a round hole - well done! Your music is one of the reasons I come here.

Fun song with performance issues, recording issues, and mixing issues. I like the big sound you got on the guitar - that's a goodness. Looking at things to improve, I'm thinking that one of the first things to improve is mixing: vocal level and intelligibility. You need to make the quietest...

I wrote, recorded and published five new songs a month for over a year (I had a lot of time on my hands, and it was good to be away from my day job), and then I decided to slow down and do about a song a month for a while. Unlike yourself, I abandoned production standards in favor of sheer...

Most people want the duck soup rather than 'the soup of the soup of the soup of the duck'. Not just tastier, not just more nutritious, but more real!

The 'female' vocal part would stand out more with a muting of the background parts, completely in the first instance, stepwise and graded in the second.

Yup. Like it. 👍

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If the tambourine was quieter, it might be even more effective for being subtle. Really like this one. Also, I like s tune automatically segues into 'Lazy River'. 😎 Like it more each time it hits the eardrums.

Yeah, it's respectable. Every 16 bars, it changes up something. Regular, all the way to the end, a good mix of sounds and patterns, changing every 16 bars. Listenable. If you want to take it up a notch, you have to find a way to change up more than that, and express yourself in it.

You're not afraid of your own stream of consciousness. I have a friend who, when we drink too much, sometimes goes all stream of consciousness on me. When he'd do it decades ago, when I first met him, I was in awe of it - it seemed like a superpower. Now, it's more like a party piece - it's like...

Send lawyers, guns and money, then.