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  1. patlang12

    James Brown Cold Sweat Cover feedback please!

    It sounds really good. The recording and the playing are both great. The one thing I would work on is the kick drum sound. It doesn't have a lot of definition. Also at the very end I can hear a metronome or something.
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    We've finally done it!!!!

    Myspace is low quality so it is hard to comment on the mix. The songs aren't really the type of stuff I usually listen to, but they sound pretty good to me.
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    effective noise

    It sounds cool, I'd bring up the vox though. I like the stuff at the end, but I think it might be cool if you brought the main part back in after it, maybe not but it is something to try.
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    First ever "client" recording

    I'm listening on cheap speakers, but it sounds good to me. Nothing really sticks out to me.
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    ah.... the "Cover Tunes"

    This sounds great, but then again your stuff always does.
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    Student In Need Of Help!

    If you look through some of the old posts in here people have posted files for mixing contests. They are usually well recorded. That might be a good place to start considering the files are already uploaded to the internet.
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    Don't get any better (Steer clear)

    The vocals sound nice. The guitar sounds alright, but it is pretty sloppy. The song overall is pretty cool, but some of the lines in the lyrics sound a little forced. It's a pretty cool song though, I like it.
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    Short, soft acoustic/fingerstyle piece

    Sounds great like always.
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    Sublime'ish song (Need Critique Please!)

    I just wanted to let you know that after a few days this song is still stuck in my head because I just really like it. You say it's part of a concept album, if you have any other stuff from that you want to share I'd love to hear it. Keep up the good work!
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    Just finished a new song - Trouble In Paradise

    Good performance, mix sounds pretty good to me. I like the song too. I like the lyrics too. Good work!
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    Please critique

    I agree with what has been said so far. Add more to the low end of the piano and lose the autotune one the vocals, although I kind of like it on the female vocals in the intro part. I think it could become something pretty cool.
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    Sublime'ish song (Need Critique Please!)

    Cool song. I really like the strings in there. The mix sounds good. The only thing I notice is that when all the instruments are playing the guitar tracks kind of get lost in everything. The kick could use a little bit more definition too, but good job!
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    Stripper Glitter...mix critique

    I'm listening on bad speakers so I can't comment on the mix, but cool song. It ends pretty abruptly though, not sure if I like that part or if I would like a more epic ending :D
  14. patlang12

    Here are some originals...

    Pretty crazy stuff, but I like it. I like the tension between whatever those chaotic sounds (is some of it scratching?) are that start of the first song and the rest of that song. I'm not sure if the sax is real or not, but it sounds a little fake either way so you might want to work on the...
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    Wish You Were Here Cover (Pink Floyd)

    It sounds good, but I second the idea of changing the kick sample. It doesn't really fit the song.
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    "Cool" - original song - comments welcome!

    It sounds like you know what to work on in the mix, but I'd just like to say it's a great song.
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    The Thief

    This is a great song. I am not a huge fan of the bass sound, but everything else sounds good to me and I think it is just a really great song.
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    Ana

    I'm listening on bad speakers right now, but it sounds really good to me. Nice playing too.
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    What can you do in 1hr 30 minutes?

    I think the song sounds pretty good regardless of how much time you spent on it.
  20. patlang12

    Jam Band Mix, need critique!

    The second mix is better, the snare sounds great now. The kick is still kind of hidden, it doesn't really have definition. Awsome song though and good recording too!
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