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    Give me some feedback on my "love song"

    This is the first happy, love song I've written. Let me know what you think. Thanks! Title is: Have I Told You? Piltdown Man www.nowhereradio.com/piltdownman/singles
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    new song... heavy alternative rock i guess

    Not bad. Vocals need a little more depth. They seem kind of "laid on top of" the music. Add some reverb or delay. Overall, this is a really cool song. There's some really nice work on the instruments. They just don't seem to "gel" all that well. Try to get all the effects and EQs to somewhat...
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    Piltdown Man here... new one!

    Wow. I've never been called a genius before. I'm not sure what to do with that. :-) Thanks for the comments, Ghost. I hear you loud and clear on the guitar tone. I've struggled with that from day one. I have a cheap (and nearly 10-year-old) Zoom 2020 as my only effects board, and it's not great...
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    Piltdown Man here... new one!

    Hey, fellas and ladies. It's been a while since I've had time to record. This one's about 90%. Need a little polishing on the guitars, and the mix is prelim, but I wanted some feedback before I spent any more time on it. Thanks for listening! Educated Through Repeated Blows to the Head...
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    FOUR TRACKS need review!

    Fallen Sky--I like the guitar sound. Bass drum is a little boomy. Everything's relatively tight. Your drummer might want to calm down a bit, though. :-) I think he's trying to throw a little too much in there in spots. Hey, I know Slipknot and Tool can do it, but they're gods. Not that he's bad...
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    joro and dtb

    Great vox! Very southern rock. Bass is quite boomy on my system. I'd like to hear a TAD more of the snare. Really like the tambourine. This is a wonderful, relaxing song. The vox make it, in my opinion, but the whole thing is great. Other than the bass issue, it's mixed near perfectly for my...
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    Piltdown Man here... Question: Really Home Recording?

    Thanks!!! Wow. Great response! Thanks for all the posts. Very intersting. I especially appreciate the pix. That was an unexpected -- and very cool -- addition! I'm humbled to know that so many of you write such awesome music from enclaves similar to mine. I'm actually a bit disappointed. I was...
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    Birthday22

    Another inimitable song from Studiovols. Very quirky. I like it. Short but sweet. Nice vox. Good mix, IMO. Not quite sure what to do with it. It just makes me scratch my head... :-) That's good though. There's not enough head scratching in the world these days. Piltdown Man
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    Could use some opinions!

    It's a little bright and just a bit too loose in a spot or two. Nice vox on the singer. Keep her. :-) Some vocal harmonies would add SO much though, maybe in place of the lead guit in a few spots. Back off the treble on the guitars and drums, add some harmonies and you've got a really good song...
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    **I NEED your EARS**

    When I listen to this, I imagine Neil Young and Willie Nelson having a baby that grows up and srites a very catchy blues tune. But that's not what you wanted to know, is it? Honestly, I find parts of each kit that I like better than the other. I'm not a fan of the new bass drum. It seems a...
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    Roll With The Punches

    I just noticed a "weak bass" comment above my post. Funny. I almost commented that the bass was a bit strong. It's quite pronounced on my Klipsch 2.1 computer speakers. Hmm... It's so tough to figure out who's right when there's such a wide range of listening environments here. Don't you love...
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    Roll With The Punches

    Great sound! Nice vox. I don't hear any mix problems really. A few nitpicks on the rimshot/snare level (slightly hot) and the bass is barely, barely a bit muddy for me. This is very fun to listen to. I so dig the chorus, it's sick. :-) Nice touch with the bongos. The whole song's got sort of...
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    Piltdown Man here... Question: Really Home Recording?

    Sorry if this is a bit off-topic, but I'm wondering: how many of you are REALLY recording in bedrooms, living rooms, home offices, etc. I record every song I write in a home office on my home computer with Cubase 5, a couple of guitars, an Fxpansion DR-008 drum machine, a 10+ year old ZOOM 2020...
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    Love Lode again....

    Very catchy. These are the aural interests I've been extolling on my posts today. Unexpected breaks. Unique chord progressions. Nice verse/bridge/chorus transitions. Clean, professional sound. WICKED guitar break! I ate that shit up! This is a definite keeper. I have to agree that the vocals...
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    A Love Song For Right-Wingers

    Long thread, so I'm just gonna skip the replies and listen. Great vox and piano. Nice drum sound. Good mix. Hell, you can't ask for much more out of a song than this. Listening to all these is giving me the itch to write something, but I'm waiting for my Cubase SX 2 upgrade. VST 5 is flaking...
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    Another new joint...thought yall would like to take a listen...

    Read the rave reviews. Let's give it a listen... I'm not into rap, but I'm open to anything on this site. Wow. Clean. Everything's so clean. It's amazing how much better that can make a song... how much more inviting it is. Love the strings, dude. Killer. I'd rather hear this than that Missy...
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    Please Critique My New Song!

    Hmmm... this one has me a bit confused. Okay, here comes the song. If it were me, I'd chop that intro at least in half. I was beginning to wonder if that was the whole song. Not sure how long you've been playing, but this reminds me a lot of my first two dozen or so songs, lo so many years...
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    Piano solo My first attempt

    Great playing. Have to agree that it sounds a bit muddy, and I'm getting a little distortion here and there. Brighten it up a bit and back off the faders a tad. :-) Some very quiet ocean waves in the background would sound cool... or is that too much. Maybe it is. Keyboard is one of the few...
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    My Very First Love Song

    Clever lyrics. I like clever lyrics. Makes me want to break out my Ween CDs. I love the "eclectic-ness" of your stuff. Good, light-hearted, fun song. Very refreshing. No real complaints with the mix. I listened to your other stuff. Very cool. Nice for those particular "moods." Piltdown Man
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    Broken hearts are for assholes!!!!

    Whew, it's getting nasty in here. Nice intro. Acoustic's a little bright for my tastes, but tastes are just tastes, I suppose. I'd have to put this closer to Country than '80s rock. :-) Then again, to me, '80s rock is Motley Crue, The Fixx and Van Halen. It's a nice song, though it sounds...
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