I don't know what style your lyric have been written for but it sure reads good to me, if you could place where the verses and chorus is I think that is going to help having more persons read your lyric and comment,
My answer is don't think just write, yes write about anything that comes into your thoughts than read it back after you may have written a page or so, next edit it.
That's it.
Thanks for the rely. Surely not me playing on the production, it is Suno AI. (My lyric). AI is a big game changer it is came the right time when I really needed it.
To all members, my new song entitled; "Short Pants (Country D)" in a country style I am asking for some feedback on the lyric and song production please. Thank you.
This is the link to my song;
Hi members, this is a new song in the mix, dance hall and pop/dance style.
Song entitled: Every Party
Please listen and I'll be thankful for your feedback
New mix, New track, New link
Yes Stratmonkee, It is the message/subject behind the song made me very excited to finest writing, producing and making a post here to hear what other writers/producers may say. So, I do appreciate your comment/input. Thanks.
Irwin
https://www.boomplay.com/songs/137078710?from=artists this link as the lyric too, and that is another reason why I posted it.
My friend it is always because of the input/advice that is the reason I post my original songs productions here.